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Để học IELTS Writing hiệu quả thì các bạn nên nhớ 1 điều rằng nếu có đọc bài mẫu nhiều cỡ nào mà không có nắm được nguyên lý làm bài, tại sao lại viết như vậy – Tại sao lại phải triển khai ý theo hướng đó… thì khó mà có thể cải thiện được IELTS Writing nhé.

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Một số lưu ý khi làm bài IELTS Writing Task 2

Khi đọc đề bài thì các bạn cần:

Xác định bài đó thuộc dạng bài nào của IELTS Writing Task 2.
Với dạng bài đó, thì mình nên bố cục theo hướng nào?
Sau đó thì tới việc lên ý tưởng & từ vựng tương ứng.
Sau đó là lên Plan chi tiết.

Sau đó các bạn mới bắt đầu viết ha.

Và điều quan trọng để có thể đạt được điểm cao trong phần thi IELTS Writing thì các bạn cần phải luyện các bước trên thành “phản xạ” nhé. Nhìn đề là biết phải làm gì – từ vựng nào…Tất nhiên để đạt được level đó thì các bạn sẽ phải luyện tập rất nhiều nhé.

Các bạn tham khảo mẫu 1 bài mẫu trong bộ IELTS Writing Simon nhé:

In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

=> Thuộc dạng bài Opinion essay

Trong bộ IELTS Writing Simon, sẽ đưa ra cho các bạn ý tưởng + từ vựng đối với câu hỏi dạng này nhé. Tiếp theo là phần Plan:

Introduction: introduce topic, most sports stars have a positive influence.
Paragraph 2: individual perspective: dedication to training, healthy lifestyle – examples; overcome illness, injury – Paralympic Games.
Paragraph 3: social perspective: moral lessons – charity work – example; even negative examples give moral lessons – Lance Armstrong.
Conclusion: most sports stars have a positive influence on youngsters.

Sample Answer band 9.0: (CÁC BẠN NÊN XEM TRÊN MÁY TÍNH CHO DỄ ĐỌC NHÉ)

Useful Vocabulary	Sample Answer
Sustain [giữ vững, chống đỡ]: support something/somebody in order to be able to continue to live. Colonise: [chiếm làm thuộc địa] take control of an area in order to live there. Low priority: [ưu tiên thấp] something that you think is less important than other things and should be dealt with last. Unsustainable: [không thể chống đỡ được] that cannot be continued at the same rate or level. Deplete: [thiếu hụt] reduce by a large amount, so that there is not much left aquatic life: [đời sống thủy sinh] the creatures and plants that live in rivers and lakes Contaminate: [làm bẩn, làm nhiễm] make a place dirty by adding something that is dangerous Renewable energy: [năng lượng tái tạo] replaced naturally, so that there is no danger that it will finish.	It is true that, if present trends continue, it will become increasingly difficult to sustain human life on Earth. While I agree that it is vital to tackle this problem, I believe that expenditure on research for new planets to colonise should be given a low priority, and resources must be used to find other, more practical solutions. There are two major reasons why life on Earth is becoming more and more unsustainable. One obvious problem is the uncontrolled consumption of natural resources, which are being depleted as a result. For instance, the extraction of fossil fuels, such as coal, gas and oil, to satisfy growing energy demands has serious environmental impacts, and these resources will eventually run out. Another concern is the rising level of pollution worldwide, of the land, the oceans and the air that we breathe. In Vietnam, for example, thousands of tons of industrial rubbish have been released illegally into rivers, killing aquatic life and contaminating drinking water. However, I would argue that the search for a new planet on which humans could survive is a waste of valuable resources. Firstly, a vast amount of funding would be required to finance such space exploration, with no guarantee of success. This money is needed now to improve health services globally and to provide better education for all. Secondly, financial resources should be used to develop advanced technologies that would be more environmentally-friendly and provide renewable energy. In the field of transport, to take a simple example, vehicles can now be converted to run on hydrogen or even waste cooking oil – as McDonald‟s have done with their trucks. In conclusion, I consider that the search for new planets on which to settle is a waste of time and resources, and efforts should be concentrated on living more sustainably here on Earth.

Useful Vocabulary

Sample Answer

Sustain [giữ vững, chống đỡ]: support something/somebody in order to be able to continue to live.
Colonise: [chiếm làm thuộc địa] take control of an area in order to live there.
Low priority: [ưu tiên thấp] something that you think is less important than other things and should be dealt with last.
Unsustainable: [không thể chống đỡ được] that cannot be continued at the same rate or level.
Deplete: [thiếu hụt] reduce by a large amount, so that there is not much left
aquatic life: [đời sống thủy sinh] the creatures and plants that live in rivers and lakes
Contaminate: [làm bẩn, làm nhiễm] make a place dirty by adding something that is dangerous
Renewable energy: [năng lượng tái tạo] replaced naturally, so that there is no danger that it will finish.

It is true that, if present trends continue, it will become increasingly difficult to sustain human life on Earth. While I agree that it is vital to tackle this problem, I believe that expenditure on research for new planets to colonise should be given a low priority, and resources must be used to find other, more practical solutions.

There are two major reasons why life on Earth is becoming more and more unsustainable. One obvious problem is the uncontrolled consumption of natural resources, which are being depleted as a result. For instance, the extraction of fossil fuels, such as coal, gas and oil, to satisfy growing energy demands has serious environmental impacts, and these resources will eventually run out. Another concern is the rising level of pollution worldwide, of the land, the oceans and the air that we breathe. In Vietnam, for example, thousands of tons of industrial rubbish have been released illegally into rivers, killing aquatic life and contaminating drinking water.

However, I would argue that the search for a new planet on which humans could survive is a waste of valuable resources. Firstly, a vast amount of funding would be required to finance such space exploration, with no guarantee of success. This money is needed now to improve health services globally and to provide better education for all. Secondly, financial resources should be used to develop advanced technologies that would be more environmentally-friendly and provide renewable energy. In the field of transport, to take a simple example, vehicles can now be converted to run on hydrogen or even waste cooking oil – as McDonald‟s have done with their trucks.

In conclusion, I consider that the search for new planets on which to settle is a waste of time and resources, and efforts should be concentrated on living more sustainably here on Earth.

Tất nhiên để các bạn có thể làm 1 bài viết IELTS Writing thành thạo và luyện thành “phản xạ” mỗi khi nhìn thấy đề thì cần thời gian để các bạn ban đầu làm quen với cách làm & sau đó là luyện tập chăm chỉ nữa nhé.

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